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Who do you think the Wild’s greatest rival is?

The Minnesota Wild are a professional ice hockey team based in St. Paul, Minnesota, United States. They are members of the Central Division of the Western Conference of the National Hockey League (NHL).

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Writing Feedback: we will tell you the good, the bad, the ugly, and the horrible of your writing. RDR ~ Colorfully Destructive.

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just looking for advice to make the beggining of this story sound better

Writing Feedback: we will tell you the good, the bad, the ugly, and the horrible of your writing. RDR ~ Colorfully Destructive.

Smallbeaniebois

Just looking for some advice to make the beginning of this stpry sound better

Short and sweet writing critiques.